A good start for House.
First, lets nip this in the butt. Everyone has to start somewhere, but you should treat every piece that you submit on newgrounds, even if you just through it together, like its a finished work. you'll be taken more seriously and be given better advice and a better review. What is a reviewer supposed to say to "just screwing around"? "Nice try?" "can't wait to see a real piece from you?" No, if you want to get better, post something that YOU think is worth while and everyone else will think its worth while too. Have more confidence in what your doing, even if you aren't familiar with it.
NOW for the review. I think this is a really nice piece and a nice step towards House music. Being an ex-drummer, I definitely like the use of percussion. I do think that the effects could be a bit stronger, just a teeny bit. Pump it up! This also loops pretty well. Though one more thing I would like to hear is more of the battling that was goin on in the first 20/25 seconds.